There are times when you have nothing much happening around, or with, you, that you learn to take paramount joy in the simple pleasures of life. Those quotidian entities that lose their vitality otherwise but carry a lot of meaning when you have time at your disposal. Like writing your diary, going for a morning walk, buttering your toast at breakfast, sewing the collar button of your shirt, polishing your shoe, or maybe the afternoon shave.
The afternoon shave is something that is blissfully ignored in the hubbub of a busy day, but which brings in a new dimension to a nondescript day of a nondescript existence. Sometime at four, sometime at five, when you gather your razor and shaving cream and brush, as if in readiness to a ceremony. Dipping the brush in tepid water smelling of schoolboy kites of summer, you paint the gaunt mandibles with rich lather. Then with one bold stroke, you dab the excess foam on the chin. Leaving the brush on the rack beside the basin, you proceed to examine your whitewashed cheeks on the mirror.
Whether the long angular sideburns or the short clean look, this decision can itself be a wholesome experience. Then you pick up the razor, cleaning it first in the cold running water from tap. Then like velvet over granite, you run the placid sharpness on the cheekbones, coming down from beneath the socket of the left eye to the chin. You stretch the skin of your neck, gingerly wiping away the foam. Then the right cheek, the same absorbing feel of steel. And then the recalcitrant stubble at the chin.
You wash your face in water, looking up at the mirror to scrutinise the effect. The blood-shot eyes, the shabby mop billowing on the forehead, the accentuated lips, the line in chaste red near the sideburns. Ah! The redness. The reward of the untimely indulgence. You press your fingers to it, smudging the line, and bring it to your tongue to get a taste of yourself.
The acuity of the aftershave washes the freshness across the obsidian face.
Wonderful description and one that I sympathise with all too well.
Great read!
bhalo blog! makes a wonderful read.
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I like your phrase, “like velvet over granite,” oooo, nicely put. The music is great too!
oh, my! sensual and well….oh, smooooothly written. very good….thanks.
You made the act of shaving sound absolutely poetic! Great writing π
@michelle and annie: thanks a lot! do keep listening to the empty vessel. and did i forget to tell you that i fully appreciate the overabundance of oooo’ s. π
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i am little surprised though that the fairer sex seems to appreciate that a lot more than men!
What more can I say..?!
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holy crap!!…how did you manage to make an afternoon shave sound THAT good???…i’m tempted to pick up the razor myself…though i’m scared of leaving red lines that read a lot less as ‘artistic’ and a lot more as ‘painful gashes’..but yeah..great read.
Great to hear this from a man’s perspective! Thanks.
Very cool post! I’ve gotten round all this… I have a beard. π
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@paris: i would very much like the woman’s perspective, if there is any!
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Practising GRE words sap? great read as usual!
A beautiful account of an otherwise ordinary event. You made it sound quite thrilling. Or maybe you are thrilled by it?
another cool post ….
how do u keep coming with such ideas ….
great work …..
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@patois: i am thrilled by it! π
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great, almost sensual depiction. Very well-written.
You make the most common things sound very interesting π
Great read!
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Dude! Brilliant! Am speechless
Beautiful! u add brilliance to the most simple things in life!
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